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Words of the Creator by ~solid-snake-587:iconsolid-snake-587:





I am the happiness in the sunshine,
I am the sadness in the rain,
I am the stillness in the river,
The comfort after the pain.

I am the swiftness in the wind,
I am the anger in the thunder,
I am the fragrance in the smallest flower,
The passion in the dancing fire.

I am the wisdom of the old,
The speed and strength of the young,
I am what holds the atom together,
Even a family under the sun.

I am the words of a poet,
I am the heart of a warrior,
I am the Sword of Truth,
Which stands firm forever.

I am the arm of justice,
The destruction of the wicked,
I am the salvation of the righteous,
Their shelter from mankind’s hatred.

For every evil, there is a greater good,
I am that greater good;
I am the redemption of the repentant,
His guide through this treacherous wood.

I am the One you choose to forget,
The One you choose to ignore,
I am the innocence of a child,
Whom you destroy with knowledge and more.

Have I a beginning? Have I an end?
On the contrary,
I AM the beginning; I AM the end.
The love of man in spite of his sins,
The One you choose to insult and dismiss,
The equilibrium of logic and faith,
From everlasting to everlasting,
I am that I am,
The Never-Changing, Eternal-Present,
Forever I will be.
I AM.
©2005-2009 ~solid-snake-587
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Author's Comments

.......ok this may seem a little too spiritual. pls note that i actually started writing it with a totally different concept and theme altogether...but sumhow i ended up with this. it was kinda long, but i shortened it up and tried to keep it as simple as i could. critiques are appreciated.
btw, the picture is the entrance to mount Zion, which according to Jewish history is the mount of the Creator.

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:iconfunkydoryjackanory:
wow this is fantastic i really like this :clap:

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:iconsolid-snake-587:
really? thnx. the original one i wrote was very lengthy, as it had more details, but for the sake of ppl not getting bored, i decided to shorten it up. glad u like it. much appreciated.

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"Our greatest battles are in our own minds; our greatest victories come from a Free Mind."

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:iconundertakerdeadmanphe:
This really passes a mesg and reminds us how insignificant we are....though in the second last para i think you shoulda mentioned his not forgetting men to further emphasis the consideration, and goodness...as opposed to mans corrupt forgetful nature...
:iconsolid-snake-587:
oh yea. good point. thnx bro. ill edit it. thnx for the +fav btw!

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"Our greatest battles are in our own minds; our greatest victories come from a Free Mind."

Snake

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